This is really good, i loved the rhythms and progression. The violin was very emotional an the drums were really bangin' loved it! If this is currently in the contest I wish you the best of luck mate. Def some top level stuff here!
Edit: @Crispybatteryacid can't wait to hear it! you certainly have an ear for music and yes it's certainly enjoyable and we can always do better. That's the beauty of being an artist and always trying to one up yourself.